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Very cool! Can't wait for next part!

"Get everybody and their stuff together. Okay, 3, 2, 1, let's jam."

Strangely enough...I've seen that in someone's sig elsewhere...

verilon wrote:

"Get everybody and their stuff together. Okay, 3, 2, 1, let's jam."

Strangely enough...I've seen that in someone's sig elsewhere...

*shrug* It's the opening theme of Cowboy Bebop, a song called (Tank!)

I like it cause it has one HELL of a rhythm.

verilon... listen to this

oh, and Iggy, listen to this for the solo I use.

ANd you will REALLY like the 'bone solo in this

Kelly Antilles wrote: ANd you will REALLY like the 'bone solo in this

VERY well done. Would that I could play the t-bone that well, but I'm a bit out of practice.

And BTW.............want the next chapter?

IG-88E wrote:

Kelly Antilles wrote: ANd you will REALLY like the 'bone solo in this

VERY well done. Would that I could play the t-bone that well, but I'm a bit out of practice.

And BTW.............want the next chapter?

need you ask??

I wanna hear it.

IG-88E wrote:I wanna hear it.

*whispers in Iggy's ear seductively*

I want to read the next chapter

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*heh* My... what ever are you going to play for Ms. 21st Century herself?

Something a bit old-fashioned...

But you won't see it til Sunday night or Monday. I'm going home for the weekend (Halloween party!) and I'll only post a little and won't be able to work on the story much. Sorry.

Damn...Kelly got to first post before I wsa done reading...grr...

Oh, well...LOVED IT!!! Very end was very appropriate. I have a question though: you really like that word "Now" to start sentences, dontcha? I know I have a bit of a thing for usong a word or phrase too often in a certain amount of time, but its your fic, so I'll leave it at that.

When I'm talking to a crowd, I often use a cue word like 'now' or 'okay' to catch their attention. I find it to work consistantly, and keeps their attention on the stage, here it should be.

IG-88E wrote:When I'm talking to a crowd, I often use a cue word like 'now' or 'okay' to catch their attention. I find it to work consistantly, and keeps their attention on the stage, here it should be.

Ah, I see. It was just two sentences in a row that bugged me. I do the same thing, using 'next' or 'then.'

verilon wrote:Damn...Kelly got to first post before I wsa done reading...grr...

Of course I did. We're each others groopie.

Kelly Antilles wrote:

verilon wrote:Damn...Kelly got to first post before I wsa done reading...grr...

Of course I did. We're each others groopie.

Grr....

Well...I got first post on the second chapter, so NYEAH!!

Kelly Antilles wrote:

verilon wrote:Damn...Kelly got to first post before I wsa done reading...grr...

Of course I did. We're each others groopie.

True! Very true!

IG-88E wrote:

Kelly Antilles wrote:

verilon wrote:Damn...Kelly got to first post before I wsa done reading...grr...

Of course I did. We're each others groopie.

True! Very true!

Unfortunately, I really don't have someone to say that about...*sigh* And no, Iggy you don't necessarily count...yet....not until I get a few more chapters posted...

:: starts waving back and forth with lighter lit :: I knew you were going to pull that song from Rolling Stones, great song and a fine application of it... good tour de force, keep it up

:: starts waving back and forth with lighter lit ::

HEY THATS A SAFTY VIOLATION!

*Tackles Larz and duck tapes his hands togther for his own good

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Iggy!!!

*reads more*

Wait, a set up? Oh, you're nasty!

Set up? They talking about Faye in the last paragraph! Not you!

I guess I need to clarify that...

IG-88E wrote:Set up? They talking about Faye in the last paragraph! Not you!

I guess I need to clarify that...

Noooooo, I thought the whole "ask Kelly to marry you" was just a setup to get Faye on your side.

AAAH! OMG, I see how it can be taken that way. Waitaminute...IDEA! Hang on, I wanna edit the ending a little.