Re: SDN World 3 Story Thread I
Posted: 2009-12-03 05:08pm
[OOC: Sorry for just snapping this off but I have very little time these days.]
BNS Pará
Near the Rio del Plata
D+3
The mood in the command room was tense, despite the fans working overtime beads of sweat ran down the faces of several of the officers and men working the plotting table. As far as could be told the bulk of the Chilatine fleet was coming down to bear on them, with reports of an unidentified battlecruiser trying to make an end-run around the fleet.
Vice-Admiral Almeida barely looked up when a nervous young lieutenant saluted and announced, "Comrade Vice-Admiral! The Captain requests your instructions!"
"Good," Vice-Admiral Almeida said, while gently scratching his chin, running his fingers over it, "What do you see there Comrade Lobato?"
"The enemy battlefleet," Captain-Lieutenant Lobato said politely.
"I don't, I see a pack of frightened geese," Vice-Admiral Almeida said, pointing at the plotting board, "They have just spent a couple of days running after us, not knowing if they're going into a trap. They're tired, they must have left behind most of their destroyers, and the ones they have are probably running on fumes. Right now they may outnumber us, but we have fresh crews and we know exactly what's going on. That's the situation Comrades! So now," he touched his chin again, "I will go shave and change my uniform, tell Comrade Captain to prepare to render passing honours."
With that he strode out of the command centre, leaving the rest of the officers behind to talk. Of course he wasn't nearly as calm as he pretended to be, but he didn't collapse either once he reached the sumptuous Admiral's Quarters. Indeed his hands were rock steady as he shaved himself, not a single nick or cut, which to his mind was fairly good on any day.
Once he finished his manservant helped him into his parade uniform, it was a shining bright white uniform, laden with gold braid and medals. There were so many medals in fact that he felt like he was overweight to the left, but still this was an occasion to strut his peacock feathers!
When he was done he strode back out into the hallway and made his way towards the deck, much to his gratification everything was ready there. A large party of men, wearing their best dress whites, had mustered along the side of the ship, as had several officers in their parade uniforms. The ship band was not quite ready though, but they were forming up very nicely.
"Comrade Vice-Admiral!" Captain-Lieutenant Lobato said as he saluted, "Everything seems to be in order, but the Captain will remain on the bridge."
"Probably prudent, if they decide to machine-gun us it would cause some confusion," Vice-Admiral Almeida said as he checked his white gloves, "Now then, let us proceed."
Up ahead the Chilatine lead ship drew closer still, it was close enough that they could see the white foam whipped up by its bow. Close enough that they could make out the openings of the large sixteen inch guns.
To his left Vice-Admiral Almeida heard the ship's band start playing the Internationale, his lip curled briefly before he lifted his hand to the brim of his peaked cap. To his left and right stood the officers and men of the BNS Pará, uniforms so white that they almost hurt the eyes, and everywhere the sun gleamed of the polished buttons and gold braid of the officers. If nothing else they would certainly look impressive.
At last the Chilatine ship came close enough that Vice-Admiral Almeida could see the crew and officers lined up along the side. "I see were are dealing with a gentleman of the old school Comrades," the word Gentleman was half admiring and half-ironic, but he held his salute as the Chilatine battleship went past. Over there, for a brief moment, he wondered if he saw his counterpart, but it was really too far away to be sure. Part of his mind however evaluated the Chilatine sailors; to his personal satisfaction he did think that the Pará had the better looking turnout.
Once the Chilatine ship had sailed past there came a whistle signal and the crew stood down, returning to their posts. Vice-Admiral Almeida however walked over to the railing, feeling the salty ocean air on his face. After a few deep breaths he sensed a presence behind him, "So Comrade Captain-Lieutenant, what do you think of our performance these past few days?"
"I think Comrade Vice-Admiral," Captain-Lieutenant Lobato began, then he hesitated for a moment, before saying rather forcefully, "I think that we came out rather well."
"Yes, yes, so do I," Vice-Admiral Almeida said, then after a few more breaths of air he added, "SO it is medals and a hero's welcome for us." Looking out towards the vanishing Chilatine battleship he added, "And god-speed whomever you are! Even if we don't do God!"
RESULT
- Brazilian flagship renders passing honours to Chilatine flagship before returning to Rio de Janeiro.
BNS Pará
Near the Rio del Plata
D+3
The mood in the command room was tense, despite the fans working overtime beads of sweat ran down the faces of several of the officers and men working the plotting table. As far as could be told the bulk of the Chilatine fleet was coming down to bear on them, with reports of an unidentified battlecruiser trying to make an end-run around the fleet.
Vice-Admiral Almeida barely looked up when a nervous young lieutenant saluted and announced, "Comrade Vice-Admiral! The Captain requests your instructions!"
"Good," Vice-Admiral Almeida said, while gently scratching his chin, running his fingers over it, "What do you see there Comrade Lobato?"
"The enemy battlefleet," Captain-Lieutenant Lobato said politely.
"I don't, I see a pack of frightened geese," Vice-Admiral Almeida said, pointing at the plotting board, "They have just spent a couple of days running after us, not knowing if they're going into a trap. They're tired, they must have left behind most of their destroyers, and the ones they have are probably running on fumes. Right now they may outnumber us, but we have fresh crews and we know exactly what's going on. That's the situation Comrades! So now," he touched his chin again, "I will go shave and change my uniform, tell Comrade Captain to prepare to render passing honours."
With that he strode out of the command centre, leaving the rest of the officers behind to talk. Of course he wasn't nearly as calm as he pretended to be, but he didn't collapse either once he reached the sumptuous Admiral's Quarters. Indeed his hands were rock steady as he shaved himself, not a single nick or cut, which to his mind was fairly good on any day.
Once he finished his manservant helped him into his parade uniform, it was a shining bright white uniform, laden with gold braid and medals. There were so many medals in fact that he felt like he was overweight to the left, but still this was an occasion to strut his peacock feathers!
When he was done he strode back out into the hallway and made his way towards the deck, much to his gratification everything was ready there. A large party of men, wearing their best dress whites, had mustered along the side of the ship, as had several officers in their parade uniforms. The ship band was not quite ready though, but they were forming up very nicely.
"Comrade Vice-Admiral!" Captain-Lieutenant Lobato said as he saluted, "Everything seems to be in order, but the Captain will remain on the bridge."
"Probably prudent, if they decide to machine-gun us it would cause some confusion," Vice-Admiral Almeida said as he checked his white gloves, "Now then, let us proceed."
Up ahead the Chilatine lead ship drew closer still, it was close enough that they could see the white foam whipped up by its bow. Close enough that they could make out the openings of the large sixteen inch guns.
To his left Vice-Admiral Almeida heard the ship's band start playing the Internationale, his lip curled briefly before he lifted his hand to the brim of his peaked cap. To his left and right stood the officers and men of the BNS Pará, uniforms so white that they almost hurt the eyes, and everywhere the sun gleamed of the polished buttons and gold braid of the officers. If nothing else they would certainly look impressive.
At last the Chilatine ship came close enough that Vice-Admiral Almeida could see the crew and officers lined up along the side. "I see were are dealing with a gentleman of the old school Comrades," the word Gentleman was half admiring and half-ironic, but he held his salute as the Chilatine battleship went past. Over there, for a brief moment, he wondered if he saw his counterpart, but it was really too far away to be sure. Part of his mind however evaluated the Chilatine sailors; to his personal satisfaction he did think that the Pará had the better looking turnout.
Once the Chilatine ship had sailed past there came a whistle signal and the crew stood down, returning to their posts. Vice-Admiral Almeida however walked over to the railing, feeling the salty ocean air on his face. After a few deep breaths he sensed a presence behind him, "So Comrade Captain-Lieutenant, what do you think of our performance these past few days?"
"I think Comrade Vice-Admiral," Captain-Lieutenant Lobato began, then he hesitated for a moment, before saying rather forcefully, "I think that we came out rather well."
"Yes, yes, so do I," Vice-Admiral Almeida said, then after a few more breaths of air he added, "SO it is medals and a hero's welcome for us." Looking out towards the vanishing Chilatine battleship he added, "And god-speed whomever you are! Even if we don't do God!"
RESULT
- Brazilian flagship renders passing honours to Chilatine flagship before returning to Rio de Janeiro.