Seeing as how his original article demonstrates what an utter moron he is, and how he cannot comprehend what children can, Brin has nothing useful to offer. His Vader/Kenobi alliance is a stupid idea.
Here's why:
"The biggest irony is this -- I could scribble a 3 paragraph outline that would save Lucas. It would explain every awful inconsistency/paradox in his universe. It would make the #!#*& coincidences all work out... including the totally predictable lunacy of having Obi-Wan grab baby Luke and hide him from his darkside father... on Darth Vader's home planet, in his old home town! This is the core scenario that we know will happen in "Episode Three" and it is the most towering of three dozen real plot horrors. But the amazing thing is that I see a simple way for Lucas to climb out of this hell.
In fact, a scenario is possible, if Vader and Obi-Wan conspire together against BOTH Emperor and Yoda. Go on, follow all the movies with this possibility in mind.
Why else would Obi-Wan 'hide' Vader's son in Vader's home town? Their final 'deathfight' distracts the guards to let Luke/Han/Leia get away. How else do you explain that Vader grabs/interrogates Leia, yet never detects her force? Watch carefully... Vader's 'chase' of Luke in the first film clears all the other Imperial fighters off his son's back and halts the antiaircraft guns, giving the kid a clear shot! And guess who's the only Imperial survivor?
It goes on and on! (Including the coincidence of whose droids carry the message.)
I once spent an hour scribbling notes -- the plot for Episode Three writes itself! (At least, I see it clearly with a professional's eye.) Almost the entire list of awful coincidences and silly paradoxes can be eliminated in a certain clever way that would make George Lucas's entire universe make incredible sense! It could even go down in history as something profoundly moral and clever.
Oh, it's delicious! There's a way out... and GL could claim "I was planning this all along!"
Holding my breath. (Not)
DB
1: Will Anakin know he has children? "To protect you from the Emperor you were hidden from your father when you were born". If he doesn't know, then he won't be looking.
2: "Their final 'deathfight' distracts the guards to let Luke/Han/Leia get away" What is he on about? Han? What has he got to do with anything? This is a
stupid idea. Vader
DOESN'T know. He only knows about Luke in Episode V: "We have a new enemy, Luke Skywalker".
3: Detect Leia's force? Wah? Does Leia having some latent force ability automatically translate into him saying: "hey, this must be my daughter!"
4: "Watch carefully... Vader's 'chase' of Luke in the first film clears all the other Imperial fighters off his son's back and halts the antiaircraft guns, giving the kid a clear shot! And guess who's the only Imperial survivor?"
Obviously this man is a fucking idiot
a- The guns stopped firing because Vader was entering the trench, dumbass.
b- The other fighters were engaged with the 30+ Rebel ships involved in the attack, DUMBASS.
c- Give the kid a clear shot: Then how do you explain "I have you now", DUMBASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS.
d- Only Imperial survivor: OHHHHH, I *SEE*, it writes itself does it!? I guess Vader
ordered his wingman to collide with him, hurtling him away from the fight just before he was about to blow Luke away? DUMBASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS.