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Posted: 2004-09-19 11:48pm
by Temjin
Good Chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Edit: Forgot to mention this when I posted this, but as I was reading the chapter, the song "The March of Cambreadth" came on. Just so very appropriate.
Posted: 2004-09-20 12:08am
by Rogue 9
Good chapter, though it suffers from a distinct lack of me and my elite stabbity sword skills.

Posted: 2004-09-20 12:10am
by darthdavid
What are you on? You were right there stabbing the fucking mega morlock unless i'm mistaken or stupid or on crack or something.
Posted: 2004-09-20 12:20am
by Rogue 9
darthdavid wrote:What are you on? You were right there stabbing the fucking mega morlock unless i'm mistaken or stupid or on crack or something.
That was RogueIce.
Posted: 2004-09-20 12:22am
by Grand Moff Yenchin
Kick ass battle, kick ass story

Posted: 2004-09-20 12:34am
by phongn
Great chapter, Knife.
Posted: 2004-09-20 01:18am
by Stravo
Excellent battle scene and very well written. Glad to see my advice on writers block has really got your craetive juices flowing.
I like the style of narration and this is coming from a guy who never did like first person very much.
Keep it up.
Posted: 2004-09-20 01:40am
by Agent Fisher
Rogue 9 wrote:Good chapter, though it suffers from a distinct lack of me and my elite stabbity sword skills.

same here

Posted: 2004-09-20 06:46pm
by consequences
Waah! I don't exist! Waah!
Either that, or I am Ninja, unseen by all, including author.
If Rogue 9's elite stabbity skills make it in before me, I'm tenedering complaint to the management.
Posted: 2004-09-20 07:02pm
by Knife
consequences wrote:Waah! I don't exist! Waah!
Either that, or I am Ninja, unseen by all, including author.
If Rogue 9's elite stabbity skills make it in before me, I'm tenedering complaint to the management.
Actually, I have you on my list for my company. Haven't assigned you to any specific lance yet though. Don't worry, there is plenty of time to die later.
Posted: 2004-09-20 07:16pm
by darthdavid
What is my fate, considering that, in 7 years i'll be almost 22...
Posted: 2004-09-20 09:03pm
by Lonestar
Actually, Knife, I was stunned that Tysroc was the medic. Especially as Evil Sadistic Bastard ( our resident Singaporean Combat Medic) would be the closest thing to a doctor we'd have.
Posted: 2004-09-20 10:12pm
by Knife
darthdavid wrote:What is my fate, considering that, in 7 years i'll be almost 22...
Your were just part of the Home Guard in that battle, more to come. Like I mentioned earlier, the Home Guard has a bigger part coming.
Posted: 2004-09-20 10:13pm
by Knife
Lonestar wrote:Actually, Knife, I was stunned that Tysroc was the medic. Especially as Evil Sadistic Bastard ( our resident Singaporean Combat Medic) would be the closest thing to a doctor we'd have.
True, and I do want to work him as such, just that Big T works in a hospital in RL and that stuck in my head while I was writting. Tis nothing personal against ESB nor diminishing or promoting Tsyroc's personal abilities.
Posted: 2004-09-20 11:37pm
by darthdavid
Knife wrote:darthdavid wrote:What is my fate, considering that, in 7 years i'll be almost 22...
Your were just part of the Home Guard in that battle, more to come. Like I mentioned earlier, the Home Guard has a bigger part coming.
Whoopee.
Posted: 2004-09-20 11:46pm
by Temjin
darthdavid wrote:Whoopee.
Oh, come on. He said you were in the Home Guard and that the guard was going to have a bigger part coming. You could at least be a little bit thankful.
Posted: 2004-09-20 11:53pm
by darthdavid
Temjin wrote:darthdavid wrote:Whoopee.
Oh, come on. He said you were in the Home Guard and that the guard was going to have a bigger part coming. You could at least be a little bit thankful.
Damn the internet and it's lack of embeded emotion. That was a good whoopee. You know, like a happy cowboy whoopee. Not a sarcastic "im a smartass" whoopee. So just to be clear, I'm quite happy with my role in said fanfic. Infact, I'm glad that I'm officially alive in this universe and that I wasn't grouped with those who ate the bad food and died...
Posted: 2004-09-20 11:55pm
by Temjin
Okay, sorry about the mix up.
Posted: 2004-09-21 12:02am
by darthdavid
Temjin wrote:Okay, sorry about the mix up.
S'ok. My fault for not making use of smilies or some other way of identifing emotion. After all it's kinda hard to figure out exactly what someone means from straight text without any markup especially when you use an expression that's generally sarcastic and...Oh fuck i'm rambling now. Well you get the point so i'm getting some sleep.
Posted: 2004-09-21 11:25pm
by Lonestar
You know, the argument could be made that God does exist in this universe, since someone decided to play a cruel joke on us.
Posted: 2004-09-22 10:47am
by Dargos
OMG...OMFG....I finally get a bit part in a Fanfic...and I die. Well..at least I took down something before I bit the dust. Thanks Knife..you really made my day

Posted: 2004-09-22 02:06pm
by Companion Cube
This fic's just as kickass as it was a few months back, perhaps even more so;
Good work, man.

Posted: 2004-09-22 02:09pm
by speaker-to-trolls
Consistently brilliant, looking forward to the next chapter (presumably the next few will be the Nightwatch holding the fort until the westerners get there).
Posted: 2004-09-22 06:20pm
by RogueIce
Posted: 2004-09-22 06:56pm
by consequences
*appears out of the foreground behind RogueIce*
Ahem.
*disappears back into foregound before he can turn, leaving a sign on Ice's back, saying 'Kick me, I'm socially inept'*