Posted: 2004-09-22 07:20pm
Or, as we do it on the HIzzile:
* leaves note on RI's Hat that says "I'm gay bite the back of my neck"
* leaves note on RI's Hat that says "I'm gay bite the back of my neck"
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Battle of the Hymn. (a second look.)
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Posted: 2004-09-22 07:22pm
*Leaves not on both of your backs saying "I hate Rhinos." and watches as the rhino from johnny bravo beats the shit out of you.*
Posted: 2004-09-22 08:57pm
You, sir, are far less stealthy than you think.consequences wrote:*appears out of the foreground behind RogueIce*
Ahem.
*disappears back into foregound before he can turn, leaving a sign on Ice's back, saying 'Kick me, I'm socially inept'*
*grins as consequences "sneaks" away with the sign he thought posted on RI's back in fact posted on his own*
Knife, you should be honored. Three Warwolves spamming up your thread.
Posted: 2004-09-25 11:55pm
So, what do you guys want next?
Posted: 2004-09-26 12:13am
I think you need to have another massive group of morlocks attack. 
I really dont know, just keep the story going. hey, maybe those medieval guys will start trouble.
Either way, i would like to be seen.
I really dont know, just keep the story going. hey, maybe those medieval guys will start trouble.
Either way, i would like to be seen.
Posted: 2004-09-26 12:16am
Honestly, I was going to have another big battle next. Thats the problem. That would be three big battle chapters in a row. That is kind of harsh, so I have stopped and I am thinking of an other chapter that is less on battle and more on characters.Agent Fisher wrote:I think you need to have another massive group of morlocks attack.
I really dont know, just keep the story going. hey, maybe those medieval guys will start trouble.
Either way, i would like to be seen.
Thats why you don't have a new chapter yet.
Posted: 2004-09-26 12:19am
PUT ME IN!!Knife wrote:Honestly, I was going to have another big battle next. Thats the problem. That would be three big battle chapters in a row. That is kind of harsh, so I have stopped and I am thinking of an other chapter that is less on battle and more on characters.Agent Fisher wrote:I think you need to have another massive group of morlocks attack.
I really dont know, just keep the story going. hey, maybe those medieval guys will start trouble.
Either way, i would like to be seen.
Thats why you don't have a new chapter yet.
Posted: 2004-09-26 12:24am
Sounds like a scene out of a porno...Agent Fisher wrote:PUT ME IN!!
Posted: 2004-09-26 12:26am
Hot kinky sex scene?
Hmm... Maybe something with families and friends dealing with the loss of their friends?
Hmm... Maybe something with families and friends dealing with the loss of their friends?
Posted: 2004-09-26 12:29am
Could have some humor in there. I know put talon karrade in there somewhere. That should be funny.RogueIce wrote:Hot kinky sex scene?
Hmm... Maybe something with families and friends dealing with the loss of their friends?
Posted: 2004-09-26 12:30am
I'm on it.Fisher and David wrote:Want to die in the next chapter, please!
I've put you in. But I understand. I got plans for ya.
Posted: 2004-09-26 12:30am
SICK AND WRONG!!!!! But you are right.darthdavid wrote:Sounds like a scene out of a porno...Agent Fisher wrote:PUT ME IN!!
Posted: 2004-09-26 12:32am
I dont really want to die. But if I must, I want to go done taking as many bastards as i can.Knife wrote:I'm on it.Fisher and David wrote:Want to die in the next chapter, please!
Posted: 2004-09-26 12:37am
I want to die by doing something stupid. Like pointing a bow the wrong way when firing it...
Posted: 2004-09-26 12:44am
Holding off on having a battle for the next chapter of two would be a good idea, in my opinion at least.Knife wrote:Honestly, I was going to have another big battle next. Thats the problem. That would be three big battle chapters in a row. That is kind of harsh, so I have stopped and I am thinking of an other chapter that is less on battle and more on characters.
Thats why you don't have a new chapter yet.
You write great battles. But if there's too many of them in a story, the story can get boring quickly, even if they're written very well.
Posted: 2004-09-26 01:01am
I'm working on a political intrigue type thing. Not my forte' but I'm working on it. Thanks for the compliment, though.Temjin wrote:
Holding off on having a battle for the next chapter of two would be a good idea, in my opinion at least.
You write great battles. But if there's too many of them in a story, the story can get boring quickly, even if they're written very well.
If anything, you, Darth Davie, and Roguie (various incarnations
) have made it worth while, oh and the master himself, Strav. 
Posted: 2004-09-26 01:03am
I'm glad I could help.
Posted: 2004-09-26 01:08am
what about me?Knife wrote:I'm working on a political intrigue type thing. Not my forte' but I'm working on it. Thanks for the compliment, though.Temjin wrote:
Holding off on having a battle for the next chapter of two would be a good idea, in my opinion at least.
You write great battles. But if there's too many of them in a story, the story can get boring quickly, even if they're written very well.
If anything, you, Darth Davie, and Roguie (various incarnations
Posted: 2004-09-26 01:13am
Bah, you too, since I put you in Strav's lance.Agent Fisher wrote:
what about me?
As I dashed for the tower stair, I heard Stravo order half his men to the north ladders, as I commanded, and then he and Temjin, Fisher and David raced behind us. I paused momentarily at the base of the tower and grabbed a spear off the rack, as did Rogue, and then dashed up the stairs to help my Sergeant Lonestar against the giant Morlock and any who dared come over the wall.
Note, Fisher.
Posted: 2004-09-26 01:17am
oh didnt notice that.Knife wrote:Bah, you too, since I put you in Strav's lance.Agent Fisher wrote:
what about me?
As I dashed for the tower stair, I heard Stravo order half his men to the north ladders, as I commanded, and then he and Temjin, Fisher and David raced behind us. I paused momentarily at the base of the tower and grabbed a spear off the rack, as did Rogue, and then dashed up the stairs to help my Sergeant Lonestar against the giant Morlock and any who dared come over the wall.
Note, Fisher.
I figured i would have been in the Nightwatch. oh well.
Posted: 2004-09-26 01:18am
No offense, but the Watch is the Mess. Home Guard is the prevelent SDnetters in the story.
Posted: 2004-09-26 01:20am
oh, okay. that makes sense. But does the mess have 300 members?Knife wrote:No offense, but the Watch is the Mess. Home Guard is the prevelent SDnetters in the story.
Posted: 2004-09-26 01:29am
No, but I dare you to find a mentioned member of the Watch that isn't a Mess member.Agent Fisher wrote:oh, okay. that makes sense. But does the mess have 300 members?Knife wrote:No offense, but the Watch is the Mess. Home Guard is the prevelent SDnetters in the story.
Posted: 2004-09-26 02:24am
I'll take that dare:Knife wrote:No, but I dare you to find a mentioned member of the Watch that isn't a Mess member.
Knife, in Chapter One wrote: Her look turned more serious now, “Ryan is applying to the Watch soon.” She said in plain concern.
Ryan was my son. My second son. His older brother was already an apprentice in Shepp’s Smith. He seemed bound to become a great tradesman and craftsman. Ryan, my youngest son, turned more militaristic. At the age of eighteen, he was of age and free to apply if he wished.
Your point still stands though.
Posted: 2004-09-26 08:13am
IC: "Ale and Whores!"Knife wrote:So, what do you guys want next?
OOC: A stirring portrayal of Political Intrigue and Strategic Cunning based upon The Book of Five Rings, The Art of war, and The Prince, which leaves us dumbfounded at the insights and subtle manuevers you weave into your narrative, and... ah, screw it, Ale and Whores!