EDIT: Censors are off for the first part.












To be continued...
Moderator: LadyTevar
As Shroom Man so eloquently pointed out, that IS the humour.Did you draw this or are you just writing over the real dialog of some comic? If you drew it, well done but even for humor it's totally out of character.
Yeah, that's the problem with paintI'm a complete asshole about this kind of stuff but your lettering needs work. Always center-justify the text in the speech bubbles, and fill out the space in them. Right now it just looks ugly the way you have the columns of text left-justified in the middle of the speech bubbles.
It's a fairly minor issure, but it just irritates the FUCK out of me when I see it.