Not bad. Try (if you feel like erasing) broadening the shoulders and make his head and right hand little bigger.
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Thanks guys. I will work on the hands, I agree on their smallness and will work towards enlarging them. I still need to practice faces and thanks for pointing out some specifics.
I'm grateful for your feedback, as I can already see a slight improvement in many of my drawings!
you should change the handguards you've got on the M16. He's rocking a short barrel, with the long Vietnam triangle grips and a vert grip. Other than that, Vest looks good, EoTech looks a little wonky, but it'll do.
However, the vert grip really doesn't go with it, if we're being realistic. If not, it's your drawing, do what you want!
Also, is he wearing some sort of shin guards? I think they need to be better defined somehow, but I wouldn't have a clue on how exactly to go about that.
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Much better on the rifle, at least those handguards can have a rail attached for mounting that vert grip. I would also recommend a flashlight on there.
You could give him a more square jaw for that "masculine and tough" look that's all the rage with goons today. At the very least, give him a less feminine/androgynous jawline.
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Bob the Gunslinger wrote:You could give him a more square jaw for that "masculine and tough" look that's all the rage with goons today. At the very least, give him a less feminine/androgynous jawline.
But he needs a reason to beat the heroes to a pulp- making fun of his appearance is perfect.