LoG Chap 1: The asskicking has officially begun!

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LoG Chap 1: The asskicking has officially begun!

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http://stgjr.racknine.net/misc/logchap1.zip

Let the ass-kicking officially begin! :twisted:

*kicks on the music*

"Don't want no revenge!
Ain't no payback time!
It ain't called getting even!
Here comes the Reckoning Day!"


Fan feedback in this thread will be most appreciated. :)
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Post by Peregrin Toker »

Looks interesting!! I'll read it soon.
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Post by Dalton »

Kick-ASS!

Muhahah! That was fuckin' cool. I like how my character axed people to death.

Er...that didn't sound right. :)
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Post by Posbi »

Yep, that simply rocked. Looking forward to more. 8)
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Post by phongn »

More fanfic!
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Post by Coalition »

Looks very good. If I may, a couple requests:

For a rescue saying:

"Come with me if you want to live."

For a saying at the end:

"I live for the one, I kill for the one. Semper Fi"

Or watch the Goreans try to kidnap a T-X.

Okay, so the last one might be a little silly.

Still though, a very good beginning.
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Post by Peregrin Toker »

Very good what has happened so far... it at least has proved that Gor can be used for something else as paperweights.
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